leaving behind
I m on my boat nowleaving my home land, home n you.
The wind brushes against my face
last time I realized this
it was bliss
You were with me
talking, fighting…
I always knew you loved me
Have I lost you
I ask myself
for a hundredth time
‘no’ says a small voice within
‘yes’ screams the whole world
making me deaf, making me blind
making me lose all my senses
I open my eyes, I can’t see a thing
All is fair in love and war
but love is not fair
when there is war.
My name is changed
I am a refugee now
you stay but fight
for your smaller piece of the pie
in the bottle-necked island
I ve always loved you
but I never told you
My love buried in the lankan sands
amongst those land mines
The long wait begins now
of a hopeful dawn
We part to meet again
in this world or in the next
Thus wrote Suganya @ 11:33 PM
6 Comments:
hi sugan,
Nice love poem...really ur thoughts and way of expression is good!
Keep writing more poems like this!!
Hi suganya,
Realy lovely way of expressing your feelings for lankan tamils!
beautifully written..
carry on the good work...
relly nice and beautfully portrayed...(now thought to leave the comment as i finally found my username!!)
hey suganya,never knew u cud write poems as well.pleasantly surprised by ur talent.your simplicity in expression is appealing.Those few lines referring to love and war are breathtaking..keep going and write many more!!!!
guru
wow, a moving work. after a long time another poetical work from u.
NICE ONE -UR POEM ABOUT FREINDSHIP ALSO VERY NICE KEEP ON DOING THE SAME _BYE
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