Sunday, January 23, 2005

My maiden poem

I'm not tat good at writing poems but occationally I try to put in words wat I feel..

This is the first poem i wrote in my life when i was 14...
I wrote this for my best friend...in fact the word best is an understatement when i think of my friendship with her...but only memories remain now...
comments are welcome....

Just like the breeze that kisses you and me,
Into my heart from my eyes you entered through;
Not like the breeze, that passes away,
You cannot come out of my heart in any way;
Just like the atmosphere that hangs onto the earth,
You'll be there in my heart, till the last of my breath;
This is nothing but a mutual bond,
Between two souls which are each other fond;
You'll be there in all the seconds of my future,
This is the only promise I can assure;
Now the only thought that makes me scare,
Is being away from you which I can't at all bear;
You are God's gift to me, I will say,
And I love you so much because you make my day;
HEY! How do I think so much, I wonder,
It's because of you darling, I SURRENDER.

2 Comments:

At Friday, March 25, 2005, Blogger Unknown said...

Hi,

your poem..is really good...u really feeled when wrinting this poem it seems...i can see it in each and every word of it...

Great work buddy
Keep it up...
Jawahar

 
At Saturday, January 09, 2010, Blogger Haja said...

Very touching...

 

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